Very interesting composition, with the horizon tilted, and what a scary-colored sky, especially contrasted with the green field and yellow flowers. I am curious why the mast is cut off, I think with it included this image would be even stronger.
I'm sorry, but I think there is enough of the ship missing that removes the Battleship feel to the photo. If you were actually trying to soften the Battleship I would say you succeeded. It almost looks like a toy.
I have a few more comments, but depending on what you were trying to do, I have to hold off for now.
Very interesting composition, with the horizon tilted, and what a scary-colored sky, especially contrasted with the green field and yellow flowers. I am curious why the mast is cut off, I think with it included this image would be even stronger.
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry, but I think there is enough of the ship missing that removes the Battleship feel to the photo. If you were actually trying to soften the Battleship I would say you succeeded. It almost looks like a toy.
ReplyDeleteI have a few more comments, but depending on what you were trying to do, I have to hold off for now.
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